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Chapter 3 - THE SIGNATURE SHE DIDN’T WRITE

The next morning, Marianne drove to Savannah Community Credit Union before it opened.

She sat beneath a television playing muted weather reports while a branch manager named Camille Brooks examined her identification and disappeared into an office.

When Camille returned, she closed the door behind her.

“There is a pending home-equity line for two hundred eighty thousand dollars,” she said. “The applicant listed Derek Cole as authorized financial agent.”

“I never applied.”

Camille turned her monitor slightly. Marianne saw a scanned signature that resembled hers from a distance.

Up close, the final e curled backward. Thomas had teased her about that letter for thirty-seven years because she always lifted the pen before finishing it.

This signature didn’t.

Camille explained that the application was under review and no funds had been released. The bank had requested additional verification after noticing recent changes to Marianne’s contact information.

Someone had replaced her home number with Derek’s cell phone.

“Can you tell me who submitted it?” Marianne asked.

“Not until our fraud team reviews the access logs. But you need to change every password connected to your finances.”

Marianne handed over seven months of statements. Camille highlighted recurring transfers to a company called Coastal Care Solutions.

Marianne knew the name. Derek had described it as a medical-billing coordinator that negotiated out-of-network treatment.

Camille searched the state business registry.

The mailing address matched a suite behind Coastal Printworks.

By noon, Marianne had placed a fraud alert on her credit, changed her bank credentials, and removed Derek as emergency contact from every account she could remember.

Then St. Anne’s called.

A nurse said Derek was asking for her. He claimed his heart rhythm had become unstable after she failed to arrive.

Marianne’s fingers tightened around the receiver.

“Is he in danger?”

“I can’t discuss his condition without authorization. He asked me to tell you he needs you.”

For years, those words would have sent Marianne racing toward the hospital.

This time, she asked the nurse to tell Derek she was unavailable.

Within ten minutes, he called six times.

The seventh message abandoned weakness.

What did Naomi tell you?

Marianne replayed it twice.

Derek had not asked whether she was safe or why she had disappeared.

He wanted to know what she knew.

She called Laura Bennett, an estate attorney whose office had handled Thomas’s probate.

“I need help protecting a lottery ticket,” Marianne said. “And I think my son has been using my identity.”

Laura’s answer was immediate.

“Don’t confront him. Bring everything you have.”

Marianne took the flour tin from the cabinet and placed it in her bag.

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For the first time since overhearing Derek, she was not moving away from the lie.

She was moving toward proof.

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