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Chapter 3 - The Price of Being the Responsible Daughter

Owen came home forty minutes later to find the front door locked, a stroller wheel in the hallway, and his wife sitting at the kitchen island with bank statements open on her laptop.

He didn’t ask about the mess first.

He saw Maren’s cheek.

“What happened?”

“My mother.”

His face tightened.

“Where’s June?”

“Asleep.”

He checked the bassinet himself before coming back.

Maren told him everything.

Owen listened without interrupting until she reached the money.

Then he pulled out the stool beside her.

“How much?”

“I don’t know yet.”

They began calculating.

February: $700.

March: $900.

April: $600.

May: $1,000.

June: $1,200.

July: another $1,200.

All labeled differently.

CLARA RENT.

CAR REPAIR.

MEDICAL.

GROCERIES.

Maren stared at the list.

“I never questioned it.”

“You were trying to help.”

“No. I was trying to be the daughter Mom approves of.”

Owen looked at her.

That was harder to argue with.

Darlene had raised Maren to believe competence created obligation.

If you had savings, you helped.

If you had a bigger house, people stayed with you.

If your marriage was stable, you absorbed everyone else’s crises.

If you said no, you had forgotten where you came from.

Darlene had paid part of Maren’s community-college tuition before Maren transferred to Illinois State. She had helped with the security deposit on Maren’s first apartment.

She reminded her of both at least twice a year.

“She always made Clara sound like she was one bad month from eviction,” Maren said.

“Did you ever ask Clara?”

Maren looked away.

“No.”

Owen waited.

“She and I haven’t talked about money in years.”

“Because?”

“Because Mom said Clara was embarrassed.”

That sentence landed differently now.

Owen stood and walked toward the mudroom.

“What are you doing?”

“Changing the keypad code.”

Maren’s stomach tightened.

Her mother had had free access to every home Maren had lived in since college.

Changing the code felt absurdly severe.

It also felt overdue.

Owen removed Darlene’s access.

Then Maren texted her mother.

Please don’t come back tonight. We need space. Your door code no longer works.

The answer came almost immediately.

After EVERYTHING I’ve done for you?

Then another.

You’d lock your own mother out while she’s trying to keep this family together?

Maren didn’t respond.

Instead, she opened a folder on her computer and saved every transfer receipt she could find.

By midnight, the total was higher than she expected.

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But the money wasn’t what kept her awake.

It was the fact that nearly every transfer had followed a phone call in which Darlene had insisted Maren not contact Clara directly.

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